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Fic reviews: Stargate: Atlantis
9/29/08 02:40 am
I haven't been reading much fanfic lately thanks to all the manga I've been reading (plus I have one fic that I'm just sort of stuck on), so these have been building up over the last month or so.
If You Want to Kiss the Sky by siegeofangels 3/5 8400 words. The military has rules, and John knows he has to play by them to get what he wants. ( Interesting, thought-provoking idea, but I'm not sure how much I actually enjoyed the story itself. )
Push Until It Holds by zillah975 5/5 Recommended 53,000 words. Ronon has known all his life that the three pillars of victory are honor, loyalty, and unity. He's been a member of Sheppard's team for two years when the team to which he owes his first loyalty finds him again, during a time when Ronon must question whether his loyalty to Atlantis is returned. Torn, he chooses the team he believes needs him the most, but the price is more than just the home he's come to love, and the reward may be betrayal and death, or worse. ( The John/Ronon fic I've been waiting for! )
At the Company Picnic by busaikko 3/5 600 words. Jeannie finds herself standing with Kavanagh at the company picnic buffet. ( Short Jeannie-POV sequel to A Hundred Happy Things, written for mcsmooch, which should tell you all you need to know. )
Missing/Inaction by crysothemis 3/5 3500 words. Ronon's not good at waiting, but he does have some other skills. ( Guh. Hot. )
Untitled by zillah975 3/5 500 words. But some days Teyla's hair just won't stay pulled back, and it flies in her face and clings to her sweat, gets in her eyes. Ronon is the only one who takes advantage of it. ( Enjoyable. )
We Are, for Some Reason, All the Time, Bleeding by busaikko 5/5 Recommended 2200 words. John/Rodney. Lines are crossed, but not the right ones. ( Completely fucked up and awesome. )
Fic reviews: SPN and J2
8/2/08 01:03 am
All right, I had a request to do some spn_j2_bigbang stuff. I read three and didn't get any recs and by then I really wanted something shorter, so I read a couple of old ones I had tagged on delicious for ages (I really like being able to reverse sort). And wow, the one rec I did find is one of those rare stories I'd rate higher than a 5+ if I could. So awesome.
Into His Hand by drvsilla 3/5 50,500 words. JR Ackles is a professional bullrider at the top of his game. He's got one thing on his mind: winning the championship belt buckle and the right to call himself the best in the world. His unwavering dedication and focus is finally put to the test in the form of JT Padalecki, an up-and-coming rider new to the professional ranks, who has his sights set on winning the PBR finals - and Jensen. Cowboys ride and get by on grit and tough determination - the question facing Jensen is if they have to do it alone. ( Reads sort of like a modern day, happy ending Brokeback Mountain. Interesting look at cowboys, but it never really hooked me. )
The Learning Curve at Wakefield High by aynslee 2/5 - Didn't finish 22,200 words. When Jared accepts the job at Wakefield High, he expects the usual problems: lazy students, meddlesome parents, and an air conditioner that barely functions in the Texas heat. But he doesn't expect his biggest problem, which comes in the form of his new boss - Principal Jensen Ackles. ( I love school AUs in theory, whether they're about students or teachers, but in practice they're often not my thing, so while I was hopeful when I bookmarked this, I'm not terribly surprised that I didn't end up finishing it. )
Receiver by dotfic 3/5 21,700 words. In the wake of the events of "Fresh Blood," Sam and Dean find a hunt: a family whose youngest child has a monster in his closet. The Winchesters know exactly how to deal with monsters, but this hunt is a little too familiar. Sam starts to unravel while Dean's show falters. ( Felt like it could be an episode...but one of those episodes I don't like quite as much. Too much emphasis on family/brothers and too little on horror. )
Skinning Schrodinger's Cat by lyra_wing 3/5 3500 words. Sam travels back in time to try and fix things. ( This is one of those rare fics that actually reads *better* after further canon, rather than getting jossed. )
My Mother Was a Tailor by traveller 5/5 Recommended 2800 words. She checks her lips in the bronze mirror, makes sure the red is even and not bleeding out at the edges; she makes a pout and gets a blurry kiss reflected back. She dabs a little perfume on the beauty mark on her cheekbone, wets her hands with the pitcher and smoothes her hair. ( Wow, this is so very, very cool. Love the writing, the atmosphere, the ambiguity. Should absolutely be read without spoilers. )
Current Music: Amuro Namie - Sexy Girl
McShep Match reviews, days 6-10
7/23/08 05:02 am
Day 6: Weakest Link
All the Pharaoh's Men by ladyamarra 2/5 7900 words. Rodney is captured and put to work building some sort of pyramid. ( Rodney-centric gen, wtf!? That aside, the writing is okay, but the plot didn't really interest me. )
Fault Lines by moonlettuce 2/5 18,700 words. When John Sheppard was thirty-nine, the Wraith made him a Runner. ( Not as promising as the summary made it sound, due to a mix of technical problems and being too romantic. )
Day 7: Zero Tolerance
Never Going Home by bluflamingo 2/5 10,900 words. John believes in miracles, in last minute saves, in the impossible. He's lived all of them. He also believes in small, random things that kill people; in the end you don't see coming, in the impossible-in-a-bad-way. ( Started off interesting enough, but ended up being sappy and not my thing. )
Unpredictable by emeraldsword 2/5 9800 words. In which Rodney keeps getting everyone arrested, Zelenka has cake-related schemes, Teyla has a saying and John has choices to make... ( Misspelt names = off to a bad start... )
Day 8: Quid Pro Quo
A Moment's Consideration by monanotlisa 2/5 - Did not finish 9300 words. Rodney is a lawyer John hires to sort out the family business. ( Show, don't tell. Please, please stop with the telling! I wanted to keep reading this because I was actually curious about the story, but so. much. telling. )
Good Neighbor Policy by lamardeuse 2/5 6900 words. His whole life, home had been something that happened to other people. ( Cute, pretty typical shippy stuff. Didn't grab me. )
Day 9: Drop in the Ocean
Tied Up Inside by gblvr 2/5 8000 words. Sometimes you just need to go away to figure out where you really belong. ( Neat idea, but I found myself wanting to know more about the alternate universe than the romance plot. )
One of These Things Is Not Like the Others by soleta 2/5 12,000 words. When the team is abducted on a routine mission, John is presented with more complications than anyone could have foreseen. ( Interesting idea and fairly enjoyable, but the slap-dash worldbuilding bugged me. )
Day 10: Eye for an Eye
Blink by lavvyan 5/5 Recommended 4900 words. I am going to tell you a story. About Dr. McKay and how he bought an eye from me, and how that one small act led to the strangest night in my entire life. ( Wow. So awesome! The kind of cyberpunk story you don't see very often in fandom. )
Illumination by burkesl17 1/5 9300 words. He screamed as his vision was filled with the sharp metal syringe and the pastor shouted in his head as the pain hit, "An eye for an eye, John Sheppard, an eye for an eye..." ( The summary sounds much cooler than the fic ends up being. Major punctuation problems and vaguely skeevy disability issues. )
BTW, I never thought to say this before, but I welcome discussion on these posts (in fact, I'd love it). So don't hesitate to comment.
Current Music: Sugababes - Denial
McShep Match reviews, days 1-5
7/19/08 07:07 am
Day 1: Thief in the Night
Perchance to Dream by blueraccoon 1/5 4800 words. John and Rodney find themselves mysteriously trapped on a different planet each time they fall asleep. ( Disappointing start for the Match. )
Mission: Improbable by sageness 2/5 7600 words. Mission Impossible AU. ( Surprisingly boring. )
Day 2: Pound of Flesh
Shadows Cast by Outward Things by wesleysgirl 2/5 9500 words. A mysterious disappearance on a planet they're visiting reminds Rodney of something from his own childhood. ( Interesting plot, but would have been better as gen. )
Little by Little to the Truth; or a Narrative of the Atlantis Expedition by telesilla 3/5 5700 words. It's 1904 and Lady Elizabeth Weir, Dowager Countess Menlow and Head of the Atlantis Expedition, is the widow of an English noble; Colonel John Patrick Sheppard, US Army Reserve, is a Spanish-American War veteran who's also piloted airships and tested aeroplanes and motorcars, and Doctor Meredith R. McKay, smartest man in two galaxies, is the inventor of the first Patented Completely Portable Personal Computing Machine. And yet, things are strangely familiar. ( Very neat setting. )
Day 3: Dead Ringer
Attention Paid by roaringmice 1/5 - Did not finish 8900 words. John comes back from a mission and he's not quite himself. Rodney thinks he knows what's going on, but he doesn't know the half of it. ( Epithets and telling and clunkiness, oh my. )
By Whirlwind Scattered by busaikko 5/5 Recommended 5700 words. On the seventeenth day after the jumper crashed, Rodney realized that the man he was stranded with was not John Sheppard. ( So awesome. )
Day 4: Eleventh Hour
Less to Say by flatlanddan 1/5 4900 words. This place is kinda weird. Not life sucking aliens weird, but still kinda weird. ( This is one huge plothole. )
Near Things by kassrachel 2/5 4500 words. After each of them narrowly avoids marrying someone, John and Rodney realise life is too short. ( Random bits of AU or unfamiliarity with canon? You be the judge. )
Day 5: One for the Road
Future Imperfect by ldyanne 2/5 2800 words. Sometimes saying goodbye is the hardest thing to do. ( More 'not my thing' than 'really badly written', but still not great. )
Tonight and the Rest of My Life by velocitygrass 2/5 14,900 words. Rodney is suddenly allergic to Atlantis and must return to Earth. ( The sex scene goes on forever! )
Fic reviews: Stargate: Atlantis
6/19/08 03:35 pm
5/24/08 09:34 am
The Memory Remains by messageredacted 2/5 Supernatural. 6400 words. Sam always wanted to have a normal life. Why is that so hard to come by? ( Just felt unbelievable to me. )
Foundations by st_aurafina 5/5 Recommended Harry Potter. 3800 words. A thousand years or more ago, the first stones are being laid at Hogwarts and Rowena is determined that there will be no secrets between the four wizards. ( Excellent. )
A Hundred Happy Things by busaikko 5/5 Recommended Stargate: Atlantis. 30,000 words. Kaleb's long gone, Jeannie's got a career, Madison has problems, Rodney's got Inner Power!, and Sheppard...is pretty much the same. ( I wish I could give this higher than a 5! )
Current Music: Weezer - My Best Friend
5/15/08 02:56 am
I wanted to get another batch of these read before the reveal, so I picked shorter ones. XD As it happened, two were bad choices and I didn't even end up finishing them, so it went faster than I'd anticipated.
"Did You Know I'm Naked Underneath This T-Shirt" and Other Great Hits 4/5 Recommended 8700 words. While students at St Brutus', Harry and Draco become friends and form a band. ( Really fun AU. )
Wheels of Fire (The Official Autobiography of Harry Potter) 2/5 Didn't finish 9500 words. Harry's been wanting to publish an autobiography for years; only problem is, he can't write for peanuts. Enter Draco Malfoy: broke, surly and the best ghost writer in the business. ( I really wanted to like this, but... )
Even When Things Change 1/5 Didn't finish 5300 words. Draco and Harry are forced to be civil when their sons become friends. ( Ow. The writing is actually painful. )
Still Life in Wood and Parchment 3/5 6500 words. Al and Scorpius find a bunch of letters their fathers exchanged. ( Enjoyable. )
4/22/08 03:12 am
Lavender Suited Him by thalialunacy 3/5 Harry Potter. 1300 words. George thought he knew everything about Fred, until one day a Wizard hit on him, thinking he was Fred. ( Cute. )
Monday Kind of Guy by whatifisaidno 2/5 Harry Potter. 7700 words. In which Ron redefines, Charlie comes out, Hermione keeps her head, Neville's got it all together, George is the responsible one, Harry's a total mess and Dean's a dick. ( Er...okay. So not what I expected to read for this fest. )
I'll Find What I've Been Seeking by pforte 2/5 Harry Potter. 2100 words. Remus tries to make it work, to live his dream. But some things are just not meant to be. ( Good premise, not so good writing. )
Just the Normal Way Things Go by guad 2/5 Harry Potter. 1400 words. Harry and Hermione discover the wizarding world is even less tolerant than the Muggle world. ( Some good bits, but overall heavy-handed and OTT. )
Less Like Freedom Than You Might Assume by bluflamingo 4/5 Recommended Stargate: Atlantis. 7400 words. Lorne gen. You don't always get to decide for yourself. ( Really good. )
Fic reviews: Remix Redux (SGA)
4/21/08 03:48 am
My first batch of Remix reviews is SGA. Some of these I hadn't read the original beforehand, so I'm including reviews of those as well.
It's What You Don't See by telesilla 3/5 8200 words. Rodney McKay's been a loner for close to 400 years now, which is why it makes no sense when he falls hard for a Blood Bank worker named John Sheppard. ( Good, but didn't really grab me. )
It's What You Hear (The Five Senses Remix) 3/5 7700 words. After nearly 200 years as a loner, John Sheppard finds himself drawn to a blood bank worker named Rodney McKay. ( Interesting remix! )
Sheppard's Choice (Theory of the Male Gaze Remix) 5/5 Recommended 1500 words. Sheppard suddenly has a female body and Rodney can't stop looking. ( Not your typical genderfuck. )
Five People John Sheppard Didn't Expect to Miss, But Does (And One Person He Expected To Miss, But Doesn't Anymore: the Role Reversal Remix) 3/5 1400 words. What the title says. ( Good complement to the original. )
The John Sheppard Book Club by krabapple 3/5 2700 words. John and Rodney start their own two-person book club. ( Cute. )
Pegasus Literature 101 (Pass/Fail Remix) 3/5 3900 words. Atlantis reads the Great Books...of Pegasus. ( Really neat idea! )
Current Music: No Doubt - Too Late
4/17/08 07:12 am
Yes, another review post already. I am not reading everything at hd_worldcup, but rather just going through painless_j's reviews and picking out the ones that look interesting or like they'd be my thing. So far, so good.
Riptide 5/5 Recommended 19,200 words. Draco watches as the papers speculate about the demise of Harry and Ginny's marriage. ( Excellent, realistic story. )
Take a Sad Song (And Make It Better) 5/5 Recommended 45,400 words. The last thing Harry wants is to lose his kids. ( Hard to read, in a good way. )
Brother, Confessor; Lover, Redeemer 3/5 9800 words. Harry is running from his past, but it won't leave him alone. Can a string of anonymous confessions help him confront everything and move on? ( Wizarding Post Secret FTW! )
4/16/08 07:40 pm
I'm not doing these by day, since not every day has fics in fandoms I know, but I'll probably make a post every four or five fics I read. So far not bad. :)
Those People: On the History of Wizarding Britain's Attitude Toward Sexuality by obfuscate3 4/5 Recommended Harry Potter. 2800 words. The Wizarding World's LGBT history in a few thousand pointed words, patched together from actual history, canon history, and wholecloth lies. Covers Dumbledore, the Founders, the International Warlock Convention, Francis Bacon, Dilys Derwent, Daisy Hookum, Mumbilius Collins, Phineas Black, and others. ( This could easily be done badly, but it wasn't. )
Walk Like a Man by mmoneurere 3/5 Harry Potter. 2000 words. When you've forgotten how to be yourself, sometimes it helps to try being someone else. ( Not great, but interesting. )
In Civilized Parts by penknife 4/5 Recommended Pirates of the Caribbean. 3000 words. It wasn't that Jack grew up without any rules, but he's not sure he likes these. ( Very believable young Jack. )
Five Kinds of Bars by sanj 3/5 Supernatural. 2100 words. Sam and Dean never like the same kinds of places. ( Enjoyable. )
Fic reviews: SGA
4/11/08 04:04 pm
Fic reviews: axial_tilt: Fall Out Boy, Death Note, Harry Potter, Hikaru no Go
4/9/08 03:27 am
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